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1 SlimWhitman's photo

Nice ending, DasaniLife!

2 ZachKaRee's photo

Thanks, SlimWhitman. I was inspired by the fold passed to me by Woab.  Actuality, I think the entire paragraph is quite good…everyone should click on Paragraph and read it that way.

3 PurpleProf's photo

When reading this, we need to understand the “propane tanks” metaphor and what “going to Florida” could mean. Oh, and “turning on all the stove burners”. Whoa. Grandma!

4 smalldots's photo

Hilarious ending Woab and DasaniLife!  The whole story reads very well.

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