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1 RhettOracle's photo

Foul on my part.  I completely missed this was the last line.  10th line redux:

“impossible as marshmallows buffered her in all directions.  The Stay-Puft Marshmallow man consumed her and she would spend eternity in marshmallowy gooeiness.”

2 nravstar's photo

I ‘liked’ for the revision, then. :-)

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