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A Black Cat Darted Eerily From Garage Headquarters.

  • A Black Cat Darted Eerily From Garage Headquarters. I J
  • eri Curled the cat because I wanted it to be soulful. The cat's
  • tail had a particularly strong taste of korma. Actually, it's quite tasty if mixed with a little
  • horseradish sauce, and accompanied by sautéed wild dog tongue. And if washed all down with a nice glass of 1997 Merlot De La Maison, then this gastronomical experience is just
  • nothing compared to that.
  • "Compared to what? How am I supposed to continue the story now?" Raymond was pretty persnickety at party games. Everyone glared at me. Raymond said, "You know the punishment..."
  • for ruining the game. You have to run up and down the street naked." I was horrified. "Raymond, I refuse to do that," I said. "Fine, then you're out of folding story and you can't
  • come back!" I sat dumbfounded. How could Raymond do this to me? That little pignosed bastard! I reached ino my pocket and pulled out my lucky nickel. It would help when I
  • rubbed it and counted to a hundred while at the same time dancing the jitterbug on one leg. After I'd charged my lucky nickel, I was ready for some action. I looked around for Ray
  • Ray Ray, jr., who had the wooden nickel which, with my charged nickel, gave our master his power. Little did I know that Ray Ray Ray, jr was with Master Spam Baby, plotting dimes.
Started
2011-02-25 23:30:43
Finished
2012-02-14 19:24:10

5 Comments

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    SlimWhitman Feb 15 2012 @ 04:23

    ... and the story stops on a dime. Just curious; why do folds that kill a developing story get likes?
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    jaw2ek Feb 15 2012 @ 06:55

    That's FS. A developing story isn't always obvious on one fold.
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    SlimWhitman Feb 15 2012 @ 08:00

    I wasn't referring to misinterpreting the previous fold which is part of the fun. I mean when no attempt is made to give any context or connect to the previous fold (which itself has an interesting premise).
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    murielschipp Feb 15 2012 @ 08:58

    It's a challenge isn't it? I like how this story just somehow.... became a story again!
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    SlimWhitman Feb 15 2012 @ 11:22

    Yeah, when I see one of those folds I feel challenged - and others have the same reaction. There quite a few "two part" stories out there that are very good.

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