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She had done it! After all the long years

  • She had done it! After all the long years of studying it was finally going to pay off she thought as she applied her lipstick and rolled the hot rollers into her hair. Now, she
  • Could leave this little town and move to Holloywood! Glamour would fill her night times and banking fill her days. Craving fame she jumped forward and
  • tripped. she fell right in a mud puddle. "omigosh, i can't go in this!" she ran to her car. unforunely, all she could find was her daughter's old clothes that she would've donanate
  • if only she had more time yesterday. She thought back on her day yesterday and where it all went wrong. Perhaps she shouldn't have
  • eaten so many banana's. Everything would've just gone much better yesterday if she just refrained herself. Not just with the bananas, but with all that caused all the mishaps.
  • I mean to say, banana skins left lying around are awfully hazardous, but they do bring boots to a wonderful shine. But perhaps 300 was rather overdoing it.
  • So, we decided to gather all of our friends so we could pick them all up. The job got done in no time at all. I
  • couldn't believe the efficiency of the team Their skills seemed to mesh with one another perfectly, despite never having met. They saw the light at the end of it, but the saboteur
  • stood at the end of the tunnel. He had cloven hooves, a serpentine tail, yellow horns and smelled like sulfur. He said, "Hanson brothers it is time to finally pay the piper.
  • He charged toward the piper with all his strength. The piper dug into the earth and he went in. The reached the earths core and broke it. The whole world came to an END~
Started
2011-01-15 08:54:56
Finished
2011-01-16 04:51:50

7 Comments

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    Deep Jan 16 2011 @ 04:54

    Damn MoralEnd... where did all the "Hes" come from. lol
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    BOMOLE Jan 16 2011 @ 10:25

    We should try setting a theme for each story started to see ifmthe story line would flow a little tighter!
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    NixonBlack Jan 16 2011 @ 17:18

    I think the only way you do that is to make sure that you include the important elements from the previous fold. It's tough sometimes though, because the longer it gets, the more constrained you get having to keep more and more important elements, while adding some of your own. Seems like the right kind of challenge though :)
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    Leigha Jan 16 2011 @ 22:14

    I agree there has to be a clue of at least most of the important elements for the storyline to flow.
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    Leigha Jan 16 2011 @ 22:17

    Also, it was actually Narvstar that dropped the "she" the first time.
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    Deep Jan 17 2011 @ 00:46

    Yeah, this is a fun place :D
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    nravstar Jan 17 2011 @ 02:50

    Oops me. I did keep the bananas, though! ;-)

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