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Critics are praising this folding story.

  • Critics are praising this folding story. "The Greatest Story Ever Told!" says the Hollywood Reporter. "You couldn't see that end coming!" says Rolling Stone. 'In a world where
  • non sequitors are usually considered irrelevant, this folding story has utilized random connections in a way that seems to unify the world: it's an absurd chart of human relations!
  • He preferred folds that were contiguous and looped back in on themselves like a Kentucky family tree. But Chaz had pushed him down this path and by the grace of the Poet, he would
  • sometimes add derelict descriptions of disgusting body functions, or references to zombies. But what AugustWest tried to hide, was that he was Chaz. He'd been folding under
  • -wear when the real AugustWest, now back from Mars, burst in. "I've been helping you catch up to MoralEnd," Chaz explained. "MoralEnd's locked in my basement. The lead is ours!"
  • "What about NixonBlack? He could return from vacation any day and then we're lost, I mean the guy adds to EVERY fold". Chaz sneered, "You don't really think I'm a nice guy do you?"
  • Chaz was about to reveal that he was a charlatan, and expose what nobody knew but everybody suspected--he had a dual subscription(/personality) and was also writing as MoralEnd.
  • But m80 decided it was best to leave this fact a secret, and so he Folded a Story as a diversion, tricking people into believing that 49erFaithful was actually MoralEnd's secondary
  • story muse. "Uh-huh," said the psychiatrist, steepling his fingers. "And you say this...this story folding thing is real...and these, uh, characters are, uh, real to you?" M80
  • clasped fingers to both temples and perspired. "I, uh..I don't know anymore. Yes! No. Yes?" The psychiatrist scribbled in his notepad stoically, drawing a banana in green pen.
Started
2011-08-19 21:29:55
Finished
2012-12-21 01:33:45

1 Comments

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    SlimWhitman Dec 21 2012 @ 12:06

    Very nice 'teamwork'. I mean the real folders not the one's in the story. Uh.. you know what I mean? Maybe I should switch back to Rorschach ink blots...

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