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Deep inside the house lay a room with no

  • Deep inside the house lay a room with no furniture and no lights. The windows were bolted shut and the chandeliers dangled uselessly. Broken glass lay scattered across the floor
  • from when my glass eye fell out of the giant eye socket in the middle of my head. This is why I am in a dark room. A sort of Cycloptic Howard Hughes.
  • But at the time I didn't actually understand I was sitting in the dark (a) because I had no eye and (b) even if I had my eye back, I couldn't see because the room was dark. These
  • two reasons were why I didn't see Slenderman sneak up on me.
  • I felt his slender fingers grasp my wrists. "Gotcha!" said Slenderman. I struggled to free myself from his tight grip but his hands just held me tighter. I considered
  • calling on Portlyman & Rubenesque Robin, but I kinda liked being in Slenderman's grip. Slenderman and his lanky partner in crime,
  • Jack Skellington, clearly shopped at the same store, but Slenderman had my heart. I relaxed in his grip as Slendy and Jack fought off Portlyman and Robin. Oogie Boogie ogled
  • The as yet unfinshed folding story started almost four years ago and said it should be finished first. The next line was to be considered the most important line folded. He thought
  • nothing could top the 8th fold; nothing. Then he saw this. This was it. This was what was supposed to be unsurpassed. This. Just this. There was no way the 9th could be worse than
  • the 10th, which simply read "And they all lived happily ever after before they all died because they blew up." The previous folders shook their heads and swore never to "like" it.
Started
2012-08-26 20:42:30
Finished
2017-01-05 15:46:40

4 Comments

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    LordVacuity Jan 05 2017 @ 16:25

    Hey Woab, I liked your line anyway. You're not the boss of me.
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    SlimWhitman Jan 05 2017 @ 17:58

    Hey ambikawolf, I'm wondering why it wasn't possible to work with the material in the 7th fold. There's plenty there. Why comment about it being fold number so and so and that it's been languishing? Instead you could be creative with what's there - its clear you have no lack of ideas :-) . I think it would make the previous folder happier too.
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    Dhanithecat Jan 05 2017 @ 22:30

    I will start a sequel with Jack Skellington. Sorry...sometimes the internet here goes offline and then comes back. I meant to do better.
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    SlimWhitman Jan 06 2017 @ 17:47

    Ok, looking forward to it!

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