"Sure, the world is full of crazy people.
- "Sure, the world is full of crazy people. But what is to be done?" asked Lenin17. "Where's my golden limo?" implored Lenin14. "I know what I seek. Please direct me to the Zone,"
- Lenin14 was one of the crazy people Lenin17 was talking about. He'd bought capitalism, the golden calf on his limo's bonnet ornament was an idol. Lenin17 crossed himself to ward
- off the Sharegrowers. Lenin17 had always believed in the Administrator and he never allowed himself to be seduced by The Countless or The Members. He stayed faithful. Until
- the incident with Trotsky and the ice pick. Lenin17 took a train to Timbuktu to get away from Northern clime forms of murder, but not far enough. The Administrator in a turban was
- fully aware of his whereabouts & sent his best agent in to "deal" with him. Her name was "Betty." She appeared innocent as the driven snow, perfect for Lenin17's
- in may 1887,appeared whiter than snow from 2013.Betty and Lenin hit it of instantly but
- Betty was still insecure about her looks.Even if,in 1887 she was more in tune with the standards,beneath all the lace she was still Ugly Betty.Lenin never said a thing about it,but
- she still didn't feel like she was enough for him. She saw so many awful things amung her complexion. She thought she was a disgrace to beauty, even though really,
- she had just been brainwashed into thinking about herself that way. It would take her years of therapy to solve these issues and rediscover herself.
- But with a clean start in the morning and good night's sleep, she would face it. He was a manipulating sociopath to begin with, perfecting his put-downs with each new conquest. All
- Started
- 2012-09-29 00:28:53
- Finished
- 2013-07-13 22:26:08
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SlimWhitman Jul 14 2013 @ 06:44
First we lost 17, then Lenin, then Betty, and finally the ending. Just didn't find the Zone here. ;-)
lucielucie Jul 14 2013 @ 07:51
How about... "All she had to lose we're her chains. It was a new dawn, a new day, a new life and she felt good." to plagiarise a little
lucielucie Jul 14 2013 @ 09:30
http://foldingstory.com/lxv8j/ The story continues...
mensaque Jul 15 2013 @ 12:56
It's becoming uneventful this 'no finish thing'...it bumms me out.
BlastedHeath Jul 17 2013 @ 00:20
Yeah, especially with the obvious notice of "this is the last fold -- finish the story!" But let's be kind and let new people have some time to get into the swing of things ...