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Folding story shouldn't start with just the letter A. It has a bad reputation. The sentence should read: Puck the Engineer had a brilliant idea for an experiment starting with A.
Then you will be ending with A, that is just as bad. You need to work A in naturally so that it doesn't seem like a foreign idea. Try:Puck's Experiment A was brilliant engineering.
From the sidewalk cafe point of view, your suggestion is yesterday's grounds. The story should have a beginning like: Puck was brilliant but his engineering was an experiment.
But for all his brilliance of course, Puck wasn't an engineer. It should come to no surprise that his experiment blew up in his face -- quite literally unfortunately.
But for all his brilliance of course, Puck wasn't an engineer. It should come to no surprise that his experiment blew up in his face -- quite literally unfortunately.
But for all his brilliance of course, Puck wasn't an engineer. It should come to no surprise that his experiment blew up in his face -- quite literally unfortunately.
He didn't die at least, but from that day forward, Puck was half the man he used to be. And perhaps as a result of this, he experienced random bouts of explosive anger. One day
he lost it screaming "Puck this pucking muck of a puckwasher!" But it was too late his little experiment with with the Puckwasher had gone dreadfully wrong and Puck wasn't about to
just quit and say "Puck it". So he grabbed another puck, his hockey stick, and left to meet the boys!

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LordVacuity Sep 08 2016 @ 21:54

This story wasn't started by Arthur Fonzirelli?

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