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Don't let me fall!

  • Don't let me fall!
  • I was that man with giant feet and the stairway was too narrow. How did my feet get that big?
  • I stood there staring. Staring at either the closing passage way or the continuous growth of my enormous feet.
  • I put my right foot out. the right side was blocked and stopped moving. I put my left foot out and the same happened with the left. I was patting myself on the back when my feet
  • stopped shaking. I had finally found my limitations and began to devise my plan for escape. On the left there was a small foothold, no bigger than a box of matches, it was enough
  • to hold the weight of me. I placed my left foot on the foothold and began to climb up. My right hand felt for something to grasp onto - otherwise my escape would fail.
  • I was able to get to the top by pulling myself up using both arms. I had been going to the gym on a daily basis, so my muscles were strong. But, I had to escape the guards, so I
  • jimmied a jimmy or 2 & I had enough to buy a Real Doll for the guardhouse. The guards were running around distracted, all of them wanting to get back to the guardhouse. I slipped
  • on a banana peel and caused a rake to fly through the guardhouse window, popping and deflating the Real Doll. The guards cursed noisily as I fled on foot. Behind me I heard panting
  • Discovering that my shadow had come to life was disturbing enough, but knowing that it was now breathing heavily at the site of my own, big, plump, curvy butt, was truly enough to
Started
2016-07-01 15:16:44
Finished
2018-02-13 18:19:57

4 Comments

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    Dr.Goose Feb 13 2018 @ 18:21

    Ugh. Sorry. I’m still a newbie and I didn’t realize that mine was the last line.
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    LordVacuity Feb 13 2018 @ 23:56

    As a doctor I am sure you have seen many curvy butts that were not plump but I refuse to give them much credence.
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    SlimWhitman Feb 14 2018 @ 02:09

    Don't sweat it Dr. Goose, messing up the last line is: a) an initiation ritual for all new folders b) an opportunity to continue the story in i) the comments section ii) another folding story Futique may have something to relate which may confuse you. Worry not! That's his style.
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    Woab Feb 14 2018 @ 13:00

    We welcome the esteemed (or is that stymied?) Dr. Goose to the ranks (and we are rank) "Whoops I messed up the last line" society, and to FoldingStory.

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