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1 Woab's photo

This story starts with “The man farted in the wilderness he thought no one could hear him he was wrong.” and ends with ” Can you hear the tacit roar of engineered mind control in the deafening air?”

Brilliant.

2 dookierouser's photo

I came out of the story hearing Abba’s “Fernando”.

As in:

Can you hear the tacit roar or engineered mind control in the deafening air, Fernando?

There was something in the air that night,
the muzzle fire was bright, Fernando.

etc.

3 dookierouser's photo

doh! I meant to say muzzle flash.

4 dookierouser's photo

6 years 7 months and change later . . .

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