I had been glyphed by a tattoo shaman, I
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I had been glyphed by a tattoo shaman, I had nano prayer wheels in both arms, but those didn't keep people from dying. Earth had become an MMO with no logout and no regeneration. M
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y home had never looked so ridiculous before.
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It was so ridiculous to look at that the protagonist (Who shall rename nameless to protect his/her/its reputation) overted the eyes to avoid looking at it. Imagine a hamster maze
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filled with ground beef and tangled in beige ethernet cables. The protagonist recoiled in horror at the sight of it and lost most of his/her/it's lunch. While he/she/it was looking
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at some object or person, a second object or person performed some action that may or may not have affected the protagonist in some way. The protagonist said something witty and/or
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provocative, and this was in turn reacted to by a second person. The protagonist then pondered some options and had to make a decision. A third person objected and some kind of
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subplot branched off the main story-line. Was the third person the true protagonist? The other two wondered. "Third person does not explain itself to anyone ever," came the reply.
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One year later, the narrative was not done. The third person allowed the protagonist time for snoozing between paragraphs. The subplot was hatched at that time. Meanwhile, the
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younger version of me that just materialized on some Memphis street corner in August of 1969 with Marvin Gaye playing on the radio past that door and into the hairdressers shop was
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disorienting, to say the least. Still, all the time travel wreaked havoc on my looks, so I plopped myself down in a chair for a fresh pompadour & smiled. I'd come full circle.
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- Started
- 2016-08-06 16:23:58
- Finished
- 2017-06-05 14:55:06
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SlimWhitman Jun 05 2017 @ 17:43
Wins the most noncommittal story award while remaining endearing none the less.
BlastedHeath Jun 06 2017 @ 20:27
Yeah, I like how that one went into abstract metaland for most of it, then went back into particularities.
LordVacuity Jun 06 2017 @ 20:46
Sorry everyone. I seemed to have sucked us all into the subplot.
LordVacuity Jun 06 2017 @ 20:52
I really envy you all your ability to keep it so tight a lot of times. I can see, on this side, so clearly how you all passed on the narrative. It is wondrous. Then I come along all bull loose in a China cabinet. I don't think I exactly ruined the story but I did ruin your synoptic voice. Mixing sight and sound.
LordVacuity Jun 06 2017 @ 20:58
Or it is probably more appropriate to say that PurpleProf saved the story after I ruined it.
LordVacuity Jun 06 2017 @ 21:00
I am distracted by shiny things.