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I wanted to discover what lay beyond conception,

  • I wanted to discover what lay beyond conception, remote & ineffable, utterly strange. Within the wretchedness of mere existence my heart grew sick, and utter horror sounded within

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  • In the form of a hacking cough and sneezing. The whole room was filled with people staring at me. I walked out the door closed behind me. The birds sang everywhere and one brought

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  • Orbs of brilliant blue light. I grazed one with my finger and felt light gush into me. I knew that I wasn't meant to be here. I was more. I was so much more. Looking up, I closed

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  • my eyes and felt the radiance of the stars above. As the orbs circled around me, their glow illuminating the creases of my shirt, a meteor turned a distant forest ablaze, the

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  • rise of the Trump-Bushes was foretold in a comet's tail and a Yeti boy was born in the Himalayas. Were they related? Who knew but they are related now in your mind. The Yeti's name

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  • was Shambalabala and he grew up as a vegetarian Buddhist in a secret temple. One fateful day, the yeti boy fell in his bath tub, and a revelation came to him, "You shall fight cri

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  • me and bring peace to the streets of FoldingStoryLand. First though you must find the famed Flippered One, who shall guide you." The yeti boy knew just where to look. Sea cows

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  • ever where and in the sky!But you must not be alarmed,they come from the sky and will

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  • not harm you! "You are not just a vessel!" one of them suggested. You are more than that. You may need to be told again about being a special person and all, but I've saved that

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  • informative word document to a USB stick that I left in the pocket of my favourite jeans on laundry day, so it may not be as useful as I hoped; sorry about that.

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4 Comments

  1. Woab Sep 01 2016 @ 16:58

    Good ending, RedBlackQuin.

  2. Gibber Sep 01 2016 @ 18:09

    My fold was created by snipping text of famous authors into 3 or 4 word bits then recombining. This one sounds like mostly Edgar Allen Poe with some William Hope Hodgson.

  3. LordVacuity Sep 01 2016 @ 18:59

    I like it Gibber. It seems we get to many folds that depend on dialogue. I am guilty of it, I know. I understand why that is but that doesn't stop me from hoping for more.

  4. Gibber Sep 01 2016 @ 22:10

    Thanks, Futique. There's 2 or 3 other stories I started using the same method.

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