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Everything began with good intentions, but

  • Everything began with good intentions, but it ended with a never ending nightmare.
  • I had been unemployed for six months, you see. The wife was stressed, the kids were hungry...I had no choice, really. So I accepted the temp job for the road crew. Hell was
  • other people, true enough, but Purgatory had to be road crew, & the ass-end of Purgatory definitely involved laying asphalt. We lost a guy a week - we were never sure if they quit
  • or if they slipped & became part of the road. Asphalted into oblivion. When I married an heiress, Asphalted Into Oblivion was the title of my autobiography. Petulla loved my rough
  • towel because it really scratched so good when drying off. I always knew when she used my towel because I could smell her stupid body spray on it. Petulla was a roommate from
  • Nowhereville. Petulla favored fruity flavored body sprays, the kind that are meant to mimic delicate floral scents, but really reeked of mass-produced chemicals.
  • The non-GMO-ed people who had to endure the wake of Petulla's artificially fruity yet fragrantly deadly sillage dropped dead within moments, which was unfortunate because
  • this included the guy from the Vegetables-R-Us store who promised to validate my parking. I stepped over his lifeless body and stole his wallet. On my way back to the carpark
  • I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned around. It was him. What was left of him. He opened his mouth to say something but his breath knocked me out. I woke up
  • and held the hand of the one I loved. I knew then everything was going to be all right. Until, I realized I didn't have the rest of her body.
Started
2013-04-06 07:30:07
Finished
2013-05-31 23:39:37

3 Comments

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    Chaz May 31 2013 @ 23:42

    First line fits with last line very well.
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    inatick May 31 2013 @ 23:51

    Great ending! I am trying to improve on my last folds as it is often hard to resolve a conflict when you aren't sure what the conflict is and have so few characters to conclude with. Perhaps I over think it. I just keep practicing.
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    BlastedHeath Jun 01 2013 @ 00:14

    Bonus points for "Vegetables-R-Us"!

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