We are whirling and twirling out of control,
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We are whirling and twirling out of control, but everything is under control. We are always being controlled, even when we don't know it. Someone has control of the controller.
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That was what i thought, but deep down I still believed I had my own free will. So I decided to test it out, maybe if I went against their plan I could regain some of it. So then I
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did the one thing they wouldn't expect me to do. I ate it. Yes I did. I didn't spit in on them. I didn't finger paint with it. No, I ate it. The big creatures jaws dropped.
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If you want to know how I could eat something like that, especially since I knew firsthand where it came from, I focused as hard as I could on escaping the big creatures. It worked
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... mostly, but I couldn't help but gag a little as I swallowed it down. The monster's footsteps grew behind me, and
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I turned to face the monster, blood running down my chin. I stared
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at the delivery guy with my mirror. I was the monster. The blood running down my chin was the same blood running the monster's face. This must be why I kept blacking out. I didn't
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know I had twirled dizzily around...uncontrollably...and fallen down an elevator shaft from 40 floors up. The pain did not subside, no matter how many Opioids the doctor pumped me
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Up to the point that the pain became so unbearable I started losing touch with reality, as hallucinations began to form, first colours, secondly shapes, which formed into creatures
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which at first frightened, and then comforted me. "There there," said one particularly grotesque apparition, "at least you were real, and comparatively beautiful for a while."
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- 2017-11-26 13:17:16
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- 2017-12-14 14:33:34
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LordVacuity Dec 14 2017 @ 14:55
Not the grotesque the story deserved, but surely the grotesque it needed.
MadWorld Dec 14 2017 @ 15:12
So...if I am reading this correctly...even though we have no control over anything, at least we are here...REAL...and--compared to grotesque--beautiful! How profound! I must now regress to the Harem and admire all of God's creations.
LordVacuity Dec 14 2017 @ 15:23
But we have not control over being Real. Just keeping it real.
Cocolamoco Dec 19 2017 @ 09:06
I'm surprised the end connects so well with the beginning even after all that xD
SlimWhitman Dec 19 2017 @ 15:26
Yes, that's one of the quirky things about foldingstory. They return to topics occuring much earlier in the story much more often than seems reasonable. Welcome to the community!
LordVacuity Dec 20 2017 @ 02:30
The other I was flabbergasted when I brought up necrophilia and it had already been there also that same day I did one when for not reason I threw in affluence and a character named Jann and right after I added to a story that I learned after adding my fold had started with affluence and had a character name Jan.
Woab Dec 20 2017 @ 11:07
Have yourself a flabbergasted Xmas!