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I was pretty pathetic, I never read stories

  • I was pretty pathetic, I never read stories I didn't help write. I vainly just focused on my own. Because of this, I began to lack in forming original ideas. So I decided to

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  • start over and do it right, reading and commenting on other people's stories too. I tore open the space-time continuum and leapt backwards four months. But in my eagerness I forgot

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  • to close the gap in space-time & caused a feedback loop. Cowboy TV showed up again. Det. Manatee had a flashback of Dr. Amnesiac & stories had no limit of 10 folds. I could finally

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  • really work on my spine-tingling bone-chilling noir thriller about a Det. Manatee who'd been tied to a torpedo by a Dr. Amnesiac who could not remember the

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  • Alzheimer's patients that were locked somewhere in the castle. As Dr Amnesiac went from room to room in search of his patients, Det Manatee tried to escape

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  • through the broken window in the back of the castle. However, his escape plan was not well thought out, as when he jumped from the window, he hurt his foot and was soon captured by

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  • the paparazzi from The Globe with the headline "Prince William Lookalike 'Falling' for Camilla?" He would have some explaining to do when he got back, especially to the Queen Mum.

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  • He slowly walked into the palace with his head low and headed straight for the stairs. "Hang on young man, where are your manners? Kiss the ring." He was actually going to get

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  • get us caught, prancing around like that. Hsssssssst! Jo signaled us from behind a pillar and jerking her head towards the hall. The clicking of heels and a murmur of voices

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  • was getting closer, oh no! But they continued past us and faded in the distance. Whew! Feeling safe, we stepped out into the open. Sirens blared and lights flashed, we were caught!

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